by cd_dreamer
It got real annoying real quick; what does it even mean? Edit this and remove all those asinine inserts, if you want to emphasize a word, italicize it, and just have dialog inside inverted commas, you know, "blah blah blah", (you'll find them on the #2 key, top left of your keyboard) like everyone else does. No stars, it was too annoying trying to un-see all those pointlessly emphasized words
I find your writing style to be quite unique, it also fits the setting very well keep it up!