by BlackNWhite601
That is a very nice lead-in, as I was totally unprepared for this outcome. Great work.
I'm hard already, just love these stories, if I was younger I would love and encourage my wife to go black.
Off to part two.
Oh god I loved this story. The hot Carribean sun, charcoal black chiseled Alpha men seducing snowbird girls in bikinis on golden beaches cooled by the blue ocean waters. Where is this heaven on earth?
I liked the theme, the introduction and the environment where the story is developed but, personally I find the bikini club story a bit unreal or unprovable to convince myself into the story. Haven't read the rest but looking forward to it.
Great so far and a good setup. But still work to be done in developing what comes next. Good Luck.
Thank you for all the kind words! I will get part 2 written ASAP!
If there's anything that anyone would like to see happen in future parts, let me know and I'll see what I can do!
Love the story please keep it going can't wait to see what happens next.
good and hot , like get details from rebecca , she must have had lots of r black cock incollege wish i had started back then and not wait till i was older,;
once i accepted black cock i haveto have it more often all the time so adDICKting
wife and i loved the story mainly because it must be true , she did not get gold bikini but we did have great time in jamaica with some black natives every day we there we both loved it, we are goin back this fall for some more fun, we are emailing the guys we had fun with and looking forward to playing with them again , maybe i will get some gold bikini's and take with us
start a club there, we both luv big black hot cock
i have been thinkin about goin to the islands with a girl fr , husband not want to go , so now we are for sure goin just emailed her about this story , we both
getting us a gold bikini to wear first day yumme , so hot great weather and lots of black cock and no one to tell on us
He's right about the heaters. They are closet cuck wannabe's. Keep going; great start!
You've got to love the haters. They obviously get turned on by these stories and are scared of their feelings otherwise they wouldn't bother going through the hassle of posting a comment.
Thanks for your "feedback" guys ;-)