All Comments on 'The Golden Goose Ch. 01'

by 2ndCircle09

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attaboyupyoursattaboyupyoursabout 2 years ago

Your sentences are too long. Makes it a difficult read.

2ndCircle092ndCircle09about 2 years agoAuthor

Yes, we'll work on that for the following chapters

Thanks for the feedback and stay tuned for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

interesting! now i want to know what will happen to Eefke and what her boss is up to!

Fibroidkey794Fibroidkey7942 months ago

Interesting start, hope you continue this someday! Would love to see where it leads <3

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Just here to dump my mental trash and hopefully come across like minded individuals along the way who like to probe the unexplored corners of the kind of fantasy I express here 17/06/2022 : Sorry (to the one fan I managed to pick up :DDD) for the delay in the release of the ...