All Comments on 'The Good Life'

You asked if it was too short and I think not. Not a word is wasted and you get more heat across than stories three times longer. Sure, you could have given more detail on these people but the overall lack of characterization comes across as a stylistic choice and their simple acceptance of their own pleasures is a joy to read. Thank you.

It would be even hotter if you were married and this happened.

The married thing is a good idea.

This one almost sounds true!! :) Well, I wish it was. So incredibly sensual. Good job.

Holy crap I felt like I was there, pls write more

I was moved to read what you were up to.:)

Well! Your writing style is beautiful, the language is perfect. Dirty, abandoned and yet intimate. I like that you lace it with real feeling. It is intense - just my style.

Wonderful.:)

Wow I got so turned on. I only wish it was longer I wanted to be with them more!!!