All Comments on 'The Good Mom Ch. 03'

A fairytale resolution. Richard's obsession is rewarded and Emily finally achieves the love she's been denied. Plus, by way of her ownership of the businesses, she has the power to ensure their relationship doesn't follow the same trajectory as her marriage to Buddy. Nicely done.

Loved the story.

Personally, it would have been nice to understand the vitriol from his wife. The reasoning here, is the way you have portrayed him, he sounds like a decent character that essentially married a bitch from hell.

Yes, aware this is fiction, and enjoyed the story all the same.

Excellent story

I love his mother

I enjoyed it, it had a good ending but one easily revisited should you decide to do so. I’m hoping you do.

Loved it. Emily and Richard are perfect for each other. Richard can be the lover Buddy was not.

Excellent although this last part moved too fast. Could have continued into 2-3 more pages but a very good read!

seemed a little rapey to me

Well done loved it I would hope there could be more chapters? Such a hot milf

I didn’t want it to end. Dammit

The end?? That’s it?? No more follow ups? You need to write more chapters. Them living as lovers, her finding out he fucked her friends, they finding out he fucked his mom, day after day him pounding his mother

Well described and very easy to picture. Incredibly erotic. Was hoping for more, encounter with the friend that hadn't had a turn and possibly the maid!

More please and soon!

Very good loved it and loved mom.

Need another few paragraphs

I loved the story. Wish it continued! Still think threr is more to be covered. THE Maid could have been laid and the women friends may have tried him again. Please think about it.

Beautifully written. As always.

Thank you

Great story.

Very good! Could go on another chapter or two where they recreate some of the recorded scenes.

Exceptionally good writing, with a great selection of interesting vocabulary and attention to detail. I strongly suspect you're involved with the English language in some professional capacity, perhaps as a journalist or attorney or teacher/professor.

A very enjoyable read on various levels. Well done.

Absolutely fantastic.

Bravo! Bravo! Another well written story…

Very hot story even with Richard being somewhat of a, well, dick. It could have been a bit longer, particularly since he never hooked up with the last of the four friends, Elspeth.

Perfection!

You stopped too short. You built up a scenario of BDSM for the mother then cut it off after one sex scene. A lot of fantasy left behind.

Absolutely loved it Michele….. felt it ended too abruptly,.. could have continued more

I'm not normally influenced by readers requests for more. Once I finish a story I'm done with it although I often write sequels linking the characters together. But I agree that there may be another chapter left in this story so look out for Chapter 4 coming soon xxx Michele

Please continue

loved that she told him she was going to shower, fix her make up and put on fresh nylons. round 3 should be even better for his nylon passions. hope to read more of their stockings fucking

Maybe? If you put something under a certain category, then the majority of the story should be around that. Here, it's pretty much the opposite. So yeah, you defo have work to do with this still.

Loved reading this but feel so much more to come.

How does he cope with the older ladies and maybe a Friday evening special.

Yes, absolutely perfect..definitely no reason for Richard to waste his time on women his age..not when he has mommy available to him and mommy understands his needs and desires. So of course she wears smoky shimmering pantyhose and sexy push-up bras..Of course she does because she wants to keep him with mommy and feel his potent seed filling her insatiable cunt.

Another wonderful story…Thank you..

JT

Brilliant, had these feelings for my mom and still frantically jerk off to the memory of her fastening her stockings to her suspenders Did "accidentally" touch her boobs a couple of times. remember pulling my cock out of the leg of my soccer shorts while kicking a ball against a wal,l Mom stood and watched for ten minutes or so. Obviously she saw my cock. Afterwrds I said "what do you think?" meaning how did she rate my practice,.She said"you looked very dashing!" What did she mean? There were several other incidents, asking me to zip up the back of her dream, asking me to bring a towel to the bathroom after she had bathed I was an idiot and never took advantage......would she have let me fuck her? Would she have sucked my cock and let me cum all over Ker lovely face. I will never know. Shot more sperm thinking about her than any other woman!

Perfect!