All Comments on 'The Goode Life'

What a hot story

Fantastic story, keep it coming!

I have return to your profiel to read your all story.

I realy like your presentation.

Keep it up

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this was the best story I read on litereotica so far . Very well written. The thing I love the most is that is is long but not too long. The story is just long enough for you to get off on a huge orgasm.i would have like to read some different types of fetish , maybe get a little bit more raunchy .great job

Unfortunately, your writing is only surpassed by your spelling. You really need to get a word processor with a spelling checker, learn basic grammar, and send your stories to one of the volunteer editors. The quality of your writing interferes with the enjoyment of your stories.

You gave the whole thing away before the story even reached chapter 1. Get rid of that opener and let the story build. I didn't even bother reading on after that.

He picks up two slutty teenagers in the woods, he fucks them, they start calling him "daddy" so it will be more kinky for them, where the fuck is the actual incest, and what's with the school uniform start to this waste of my time, it came from nowhere and went nowhere, why did you even bother? this isn't a story, it's just a couple of scenes from a bad porn movie, and should be in the E/E category, there's no incest here at all. What, did you think them calling him daddy qualifies this for the incest category? Do you even know what incest is? Fuckwitted story from a fuckwit.

there was incest 'cause the girls were sisters. also it was a flashback, memory cause it said a year ago. oh i thought it was good.

Wish it was me. I have done 3 ways before. Not with 2 girls so into sex. <sigh> if only.