All Comments on 'The Graceless Waitress'

short but sweet

Loved that, it was so hot

I'm so delighted by this story! Quick to the sex, (which is what we are here for!) with just the right amount of character development for me. The non-consent wasn't terribly offensive, allowing me to stay in a little less of a purely fantasy place. The m-dom, fem-sub stories can be over the top with playing there, but this one was able to ride that line without leaving me feeling gross. Let me know if you have other works!

Thanks for the comments, all! I admit I was a bit nervous to submit my first story. The positive feedback makes me want to write more. :)