All Comments on 'The Grey Lady Ch. 03'

good story. i hope pete does enjoy the cat...trs

He can't promise he won't rape her again, just that it will feel better? I'm not saying oh he shouldn't try to sleep with her again, but that line was dumb lol.

You're doing a really good job! This story is awesome

That had me laughing. I think you meant to say something like "if we ever do this again it might not hurt".

I'm really enjoying. Keep up the good work.

Great story! I'm thoroughly enjoying it and cannot wait to read more!

"Please sir, may I have some more?" Lol. I need more of this story.

Still no news on the sister and her son?

Very much looking forward to her memories trickling back and the slow fall for Jake.

You have to write more! This is good stuff right here! You keep it well in the time period it's in and it's just the kind if story I've been looking for!

As for Jake's comments, he is a plundering pirate remember.