All Comments on 'The Groom and the Bridesmaid'

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LustyScribeLustyScribe4 months ago

I'm going to be honest, this was very hard to even read at first. You jump from first to third person voice. It was a hot idea, but that detracts from a story for me.

RTR10RTR104 months ago

Is this the same Simon & Sophie from your story "NYE Party- Mistaken Identity"? Just curious.....

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Hope Sophie figures out quickly she has neither a best friend nor a husband. Get the joke of a marriage annulled and get away from this piece of shit.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

can't even spell the names of the main characters consistently, much less make it read as if written by someone that managed to past the first grade.

PappasleazePappasleaze4 months ago

This would be a good start up to a cuckquean story. Think about it.

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