All Comments on 'The Grove City Pool'

Great hot sensuous story!

Good job1

anyone would want to plaguerize this is beyond me. It's not that great a story.

In response to the anonymous comment, I agree that this is not my best work. Never the less, READ the other story 'Fun in the Sun" by '1ofhistoys', it is a line for line ripp off. What he actually did was delete the first paragraph and change the ending, but there are numerous paragraphs that are flat out copied.

For the anonymous critic, my metaphors, in this story, are pretty good. IMO, that's a creativity that I have.

SLC-Ohio