All Comments on 'The Guest'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Followup, will be great

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

Love the way you write n/c dialogue

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 4 years ago
The Usual Trenchant Wit Deftly Cutting Thru Illusions of Convention and Morality

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

timrivtimrivabout 4 years ago

Rapist, chapter 2 should his wife divorce him, Dion charge him with rape, Mike goes to prison for 10 years, he becomes the block bitch where he services ten guys every day of his sentence. Dion and Sam get married.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Great last line :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

nicely written thanks and Timriv get a life. It's called FICTION you know that state like star wars where it's not actually real but entertainment for people who are able to sort out reality from fantasy...... but then maybe not you are Canadian......

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 1 year ago

The last paragraph made a good story even better. 5*~JB

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