All Comments on 'The Guy in Apartment 10a Ch. 01'

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richie78richie78over 1 year ago

Really kinda liked it, but I hope that Georgia doesn't end up a bimbo

sluttyinprogresssluttyinprogressover 1 year ago

Really liked the details and atmosphere!

BraincrashBraincrashover 1 year ago

It's well written but Georgia is so stupid, it bordered on unbelievable. Anybody else would have make the connection by now on why she isn't affected by Vince yet.

OnlyInMyMindOnlyInMyMind8 months ago

Not a bad story. Gotta admiy I gave an extra star for "hotter that Texas tarmac'. That was a gem!

MenoetesMenoetes8 months agoAuthor

Ha! Thanks @OnlyInMyMind. I do muck about with alliteration and metaphor quite a bit :P

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