by Menoetes
It's well written but Georgia is so stupid, it bordered on unbelievable. Anybody else would have make the connection by now on why she isn't affected by Vince yet.
Not a bad story. Gotta admiy I gave an extra star for "hotter that Texas tarmac'. That was a gem!
Ha! Thanks @OnlyInMyMind. I do muck about with alliteration and metaphor quite a bit :P