by Techomancer
glad to see you continue the story.... i love the imagination this guy has wish there were more people like that out in the world... cant wait to see what happenes next...
so far the best in a long time. erotic, exceptionally creative, everything new, no old tales repeted. your gifted with imagination + you have something others lost, respect towards others and yourself. I really love the story.
Of all the erotic stories I've read over the years, your stories draw me in the most. The creativity and knowledge behind them is incredible. It'll be a great disservice to the Literotica community if you don't continue your work.
This is such a great́«ªstory! I really like the character development. It's refreshing and oh so hot! You are a very good writer. More please!