All Comments on 'The Halloween Hoax'

Well paced, good anticipation, evocative descriptions—nicely done.

I gave it 5 stars but I was on the fence if it should be 4 or 5.

Revenge is a great plot, but the revenge needs to be murder. She could have killed Quinn's BF and set her up to take the fall. Or poisoned the whole party.

You had a five from me right up until the weed smoking scene. And while it's nice that someone finally did a pretty

good nymphomaniac story, I worry that your character exhibits absolutely no fear of getting an STD. 3/5.

A good read. Though it was a stretch to think that three girls could be so similar in build (and voice?), I liked the fact that it was almost tongue-in-cheek and stayed light-hearted through the whole thing. She wanted something and she got it. We didn't need the happy ending, but all stories must end somehow. So, yeah.

~B