All Comments on 'The Halloween Party'

A bit to artsy for reading here.

Well written, good tension and great pacing and smokin' hot too! Thanks!

Okay so you like to fuck around and let your wife fuck other people good for you. Take your agenda elsewhere.

Feels kind of rushed and there wasn't a lot of detail or build up.

Please people, this site is not the classics. It's a place for people to post the stories that they have spent time designing and writing. The poet did a nice job putting together a nice tale about a wife's fantasy. Keep up the nice work...looking forward to reading more.

the appropriate costume. Not bad but too gay for me, and far too short and detached after a promising start...Mancelt

I thought it was very hot, certain elements weren't my exact preferences, but that is what is great about this site, something for everyone. I thought you did an excellent job, I have read much, much worse. Keep writing.

time they can both suck it together. No one stays married to each other longer than a couple that suvcks cock together

Cock hounds are usually women or gay - which are you writer?