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by Str8tJacket

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Rape

Get professional help

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Quick and right to it. Keep writing ur good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Rape II

Don't think you have to get professional help to write more storys like this. Go on - show more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Story

More realistic than most. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I like a lot of the stuff in it, but the writing needs a bit of work. Only caught one spelling mistake though.

"uses you as hit fuck toy."

Str8tJacketStr8tJacketover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank You Commentors

I have been blown away by all of the amazing comments. I submitted this story over 2 years ago and it is still being favorited and commented on.

I have written several stories like this now and am considering posting / publishing them.

Anxious to hear from all of you.

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Where do I begin, have always been interested in Profound Passion My stories reflect my deep seated hunger for Passion of many kinds, probably not as extreme as most, although far far from vanilla. I have reinvented myself over the past few years, changed my life situation, ...