by HaydenDLinder
interesting, look forward to reading more.
Efficient intro to main characters and ambiance.
great beginning!
Hey Anon,
Thank you for the comment. I spent a lot of time on this one. So, I'm very happy you like it.
Excellent writing, yes you have certainly captured my imagination and I’m looking forward to the next instalments, I like your style
Hi Ducatasti, That is very cool. It means a lot when someone enjoys my work. AND I think you will enjoy the rest too. Thank you for commenting and reading. And have fun. :)
I really enjoy your work and took the time to go buy a book to support you.
Thanks for an entertaining story.
No, thank YOU for buying a copy. :) I need all the help I can get.
This is so (so!) different from your other stories. Not just the content, but the pace, description, the writing style ... everything! Looking forward to reading more. 5 from me.
Hey Aspern, Yeah, this was actually the first thing I ever wrote. VERY flattered that you're enjoying it.
Thank you so much for the comment. That means a lot. :)