by dlsloan
this story has finally "jumped the shark" as the kids say. The hard body series was an awesome storyline, very well written. But this series has gone steadily downhill. You should wrap it up and have cori move on to something else.
Okay you have officially redeemed your self with this chapter. It was great!!! ANY MORE?!?!?!?!? I think you should have the guys from the shop come to San Diego and open a new shop there, because without Cori it just wasn't the same and they can hire new people such or whatever. Just please continue.
Keep on going DL. Your stuff is great and I would love to read more.
lso, is there a blonde out there that you have in mind when describing Cory? If so, I'd love to know who it is. I'd love to see a pic of whoever she is...
Thanks!
DaddyMud
I am hoping this series continues, even if you decide to just wrap up the story. Personally, I would like to see Cori to shift to another place when this story wraps up, just like the first story line.
This has been a great series and am waiting for the continuation. I keep coming back waiting an hoping there is another chapter. I hope that she starts to turn around step dad's business. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
Hope that the author returns. I loved this series.