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All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 02'

by dlsloan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great build up

Great little tease of a story, I can't wait to see what she gets up to with John. I love how you're furthering the world of your characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
well written but went nowhere

teased me

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.