All Comments on 'The Harem's Lessons Ch. 03'

oh oh my my oh my.....wonderful!!!!

GAWD!!! i so love this story and was so excited to have a great read ahead for the evening. Thank you for posting again so quickly with such a well written addition to this story...this story should be published and i for one...would buy it!! Please keep up the great work and thank you thank you for allowing us to read such a treat...did i say i love this story???!!*smile* respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Loved it, please write more!!!!!

Thanks to everyone for your wonderful feedback. I am pleased to inform you that Chapter 4 is about halfway finished, and should be ready to post within the next week or so. It has been a long time coming, I know, but I am getting into the really exciting part of the story and as I almost finished Chapter 4 I decided I wanted to go a different direction and deleted most of it. :D So, hopefully the new version will be as well-liked as Chapter 3.

Thanks again and stay tuned!

you are a very very skilled writer!!! can i take this moment to beg for ariya to not end up with lord bael? i like how you've created his character - how his actions with wren and the washerwoman make him pretty despicable, but then his affection for his "menagerie" of women makes him likeable...but i still don't think he's the right person for ariya. please please let ariya be with the Captain!

Great story, I can't wait to read the next installation. :)

... why Ariya didn't demand her freedom in return for helping Bael with his negotiations? That would seem like a reasonable deal to me, especially since she does not want to be his slave ...