by NewOldGuy77
[30.09.23]
After 1st reading 'Wings of Desire' nearly two years ago, I finally read the comments and got to yours and your mention of this sequel story...and I'm glad I did!
This is an excellent continuance (and closure for the original protagonist and his Harpy spouse).
11/10!!!!!
This one perfectly complements the truely wonderful original. Very well done.
👽🤛🎓🎖Thank you for writing a most excellent sequel to } Wings of Desire {
I enjoyed both stories immensely as both sucked me into the lives of the people concerned, be they human or any of the other beautiful/colourful species.
Bravo and encore.
WE WANT MORE 💐🤩👏 ✍️✍️✍️
I’ve read Wings of Desire, pretty much all of taiyakisobe’s stuff except those I wasn’t interested in. But “The Vixen” remains my favorite in spite of implausible victory of the therians.
Initially I thought the story was about the daughter seeking a mate but nope, instead you set it from the perspective of his son, born from the woman the harpy had taken him from. I enjoyed her story and I liked that you gave her redemption. Even the blacksmith I felt had softened in his old age before death, or maybe that’s his stepson’s fondness for him in spite of his mother’s story.
But our guy got a happy ending with his own harpy. A man of steel, fathering *forty three* chicks, that’s impressive. As always, keep writing, I enjoy stories like these.
I loved Wings of Desire and ditto for this story. Very Very good!! Thanks so much for the additional Harpy Chronicles.
I share your admiration of taiyakisoba‘s writing. This was a good addition to his story. Thanks.
A wonderful follow up to a story I really enjoyed. I enjoy a great majority of your works and look forward to your next story.