All Comments on 'The Haunted Brothel Pt. 01'

Too short to enjoy, and yes that affected my score. Geez, everyone has gotten obsessed with multiple chapters....just give us a damn full story to read. Doubt I will follow the rest of this one, just cause i dont want the aggravation of having to watch for the next episode.......

I could actually see this as a TV show. Keep it up. Interested to see where it goes next

i am completely with Bogiera again a story with no much words. this is an erotic site not TV show come back next week for the next episode or make them much much longer with real chapters

Let suck on her big milkers and fill her womb up!!

Nice idea, badly written though.

Sorta boring.......

Not much to this story and where is the incest?? Might get better in the next chapter (I hope)!!!!!!!!!!!

Not much of a story and where is the incest???????????And when is part 2 coming??????????????

You've got a good start, a nice foundation to build your story upon! There really does need to be a story to go on the foundation. The next logical step would be to receive the special invitation and attend the party. Then, what happens after the party? What is the new normal? Is it only at Halloween that this repeats, or is it only the beginning? So much more of this story to complete!

Interesting concept, but where's the rest of this?