All Comments on 'The Haunted House of Desire'

So any when people find there happy-ever-after even across desth

Haha…ghosteth with the mosteth! I want one!

Is this house still on the market? Would like to stay some weeks. ;)

When he is on vacation I would like to keep Ruth satisfied.

What a wonderful story. So glad that they both ended up being able to be happy in the end. The descriptions were also very hot, but more than that, the feeling of joy was palpable. Very very nice. 5*

Wonderful story, reading tales like this makes it a little easier to survive in this dull world.

Rod Serling meets Mills & Boon. Good job!

Thank you for your lovely comments, people. Glad you enjoyed the story. :)

Great job. Such an creative storyline. So glad you decided to try your hand at writing erotica in English. I am going to have to read the rest of your stories.

you have the bet ideas when it comes to paranormal and non human women.... amazing story, can't wait for more sexy stories from you

Wonderful story. It was easy to try and put myself in his place. If only. Lol. I would love to read further adventures the two of them have.

Thanks, everyone. :)

I had an alternate ending in mind for this one, so I thought I'd share it:

As the couple keeps having more and more wild sex, our hero seems to be drawn more and more into it, until all he can think about is constantly having sex with the amazing Ruth. He seems to ignore more and more of his everyday life, as if it begins to fade out. Then, cut to the real estate agent Porter talking to his partner about how strange it was that the haunted house seems to be completely problem free now, and he'd remark on how strange it was that the customer went missing at the same time... Wooooo spooky. :)

Very original story, loved it! 5 stars thank you

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Top Shelf Writing!

11/10!!!!!

Fantastic read! Wouldn't change a thing

I thought that the mysterious ghost would turn out to be some sort of house spirit, as of the house itself wanting to serve and welcome him, after having been empty and just waiting to be filled again for so long. Still a very interesting twist, and very nicely and erotically done.