All Comments on 'The Healer Pt. 02'

I'm totally hooked on this story.

Poor Cora, she's been hit on the head with too much too soon. I wonder where this is going to go next.

Wonderful story! It actually has a great plot! (Or a plot at all! ;-)) but I do hope this won't become a love triangle. So far, I love it!

You should put this on Wattpad or Fictionpress!

Courtesy - Curtsey

I know practically everyone hates hearing this but I hope you are able to upload the next chapter soon! I havent been able to read as much stories from literotica till I found your story here. It has the most fascinating plot! Seeing that Coral might be in a harem of centours and males or just have a simple passionate love with Quell or with Vadim

A version with corrected grammar and a few hundred less commas is pending. Yes, I am comma happy when I write. There are more parts coming--it took me a few weeks to get the first bit approved and several days for the second part to pop out of pending, so I appreciate your patience!

You are truly gifted. I'm completely addicted to your story, what will happen next. You have a way with words and have created such an intriguing story! Can't wait to read more!!!

Keep them coming, your story is quite addicting. I look forward to reading the next part. Feel free to make them as long as you want as well, that just means I have more to read before I am once again forced to wait on the next piece of the story.

Great writing and story. I hope it doesn’t turn into a love competition. That would ruin the adventure with her centaur. Lots of commas is how I write so no prob lol. Thanks! Ed

So good! Very compelling and well written and I of course wasn't more