All Comments on 'The Healer Pt. 11'

by AfterDusk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding

Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

This series by far is my most favorite! You are a great story teller!

RheamistressRheamistressover 5 years ago

I have been waiting for this chapter... Now comes the time of working through and healing... But I do pray that no one ever learns that it was Coral that did the killing.

Keep up the great writing. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
KEEP THE MOMENTUM GOING!

This is such a great story you owe it to your fans to keep writing!

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 5 years ago
Great Work!!

I loved how you told it from his POV. Quite the mistress of illuminating all the angles in this intriguing tale:) So knowledgeably. Do you have a centaur lover perhaps? Humm, perhaps in another reincarnation you did:) At any rate, you story weaving skills are in full display in this chapter and I loved it. My uo moni:) Thank you for writing for us Dusky Girl:)

DV19DV19over 5 years ago
A nice story, looking forward to more

I usually do not read non-human/human stories, but your writing style, the 'plot' of this story won me over, and I quickly read all 11 of the chapters.

I'm anxiously waiting for more installments.

A great read !!

DV19

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

I am anxiously awaiting another chapter- so good so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A perfect read

This story has everything - simple as that. Extremely well written, orignal and unusual. What really astounds me is the variation in pace. Not something I ever thought about, but this is like a ski slope. One minute admiring the scenery and the next flying towards a precipice with no apparent way out. I just love it !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Been over a month now

I have been waiting since this chapter came out... But no worries, I will still be here for your amazing work. I just hope we won't wait much longer for the next chapter. Thanks for providing us great reads.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 5 years ago
So sad.

I hate these last few chapters as much as I love them. It is hard to read when you have been in a similar situation. As a rape victim of someone I thought I loved, I hurt for Coral, Quell, and Vadim, as Coral seems her raper every time she sees her mate.

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