by LukasGrey
apparently authors like to know when people like their stuff. THIS IS FRAKING AWESOME, MORE, MORE PLEASE, hope that was appropriately clear guidance to you.
An amazing story! The character development, personalities, and story arcs are woven together in a compelling, emotional, and tender way. Lukas, you’re incredibly gifted author and one of the very best on this site. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Bravo!
Not sure how many stories you write, but I read a ton of books and short stories. However, this is my first comment ever posted. I am quite fascinated with the characters you are developing, and am eagerly anticipating the rest of the story. Good job so far!
I have thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this story. I find the characters realistic and fascinating. Please continue; I literally look on Literotica every day to see if the new chapter is out yet. Thanks for the story so far, keep up the great work!
I first came across you writing from your fallen/falling series and was delighted to see you writing again. This new series is just fabulous, the characters are really great and it's some top class erotica. Looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you're safe and healthy during these uncertain times.
I mean....hell....3 pages? How long does it take to write 3 pages. If you can't finish a story then don't post it.
It just pisses everyone off