All Comments on 'The Herdmasters Ch. 01'

Nice start.

I gave this a three star rating. I'm interested to see what way you will take this story. Till then I'm not able to give a better or worse rating.

"By any standards, this was somewhere between weird and completely evil." Just sayin'. Now add some more fun to this, you're off to a good start and your writing skills are better than most around here.

As a prolific reader with a very wide range of tastes, I am happy to say I'm more than mildly intrigued! This was an excellent beginning to a much larger story. The exposition was quite well-balanced: I could see the cow-girls and bull, and the main character, quite well. I'm really looking forward to the next installment. ☺

It really annoying to read something Unique and suddenly figuring out there is not a 2nd or 3rd page.

Please do us the service of thinking of that in the coming parts