All Comments on 'The Hero Ch. 02'

Very nice story. So many ways to write a changeling, and when you pair it with other exotic elements, who knows what might happen.

Definitely looking forward to another chapter if you still have the muse for it.

Anxiously waiting.......

But switching I's gets hard to follow. Best just to use 3rd person when writing if you cannot keep to one person POV.

You could do with a little help on word usage and tenses. Eg lay is what hens do with eggs. People lie on a bed. Plus others, try finding an editor to sort the little things.

My word you are some writer. I would pay to read something so good. Please don't leave it too long before the next chapter! x

I'm always hoping something so intreguing will continue so that I can really become immersed in your world. I want to know how her life will change, what abilities a fairy has, and how she and her vampire will overcome the problems a strange new world throws at them.

It's too bad I will have to wait for the next chapter, assuming it ever comes. 😞

This is amazing. I must know more of this story. It actually touches on some of my kinks. Please write chapter 3 soon, i beg you.