All Comments on 'The Hidden Box'

You lost me at the "open relationship" discovery about his parents. Ruined what would have been far more heated otherwise.

Can never tame unbridled passion

This was the perfect hot story, well timed, 2 points of view. I thank you so much for a much needed come!

Excellent piece of work. Thank you.

Pretty good story, but the end was a bit sad, would have been 5 stars if they had many kids together, like they should have had.

Thanks for the read. Look forward to more. 😀

Excellent story. I enjoyed reading both pov's, it let us see how it call came together. Not sure about that last paragraph, but other then that it was very well written. 5stars.

Well written, good length, steamy sex , I would love to learn more of this craft.

Great story. I fired off like a cannon after I finished reading it. Thank you!

Oh my, this was just lovely and so, so hot!

Some great back and forth between the characters, so much intensity, so much passion, so many varying emotions and all of it ending it hot, nasty sex. Thanks again for another five star effort, girlwithagift keeps on giving. Literotica owes you big time, you probably are driving more traffic here than anyone. Keep up the great work. And yes, I still miss you.

tfw

Good story--normally I don't like mom/son stories but this one was good until the very last paragraph. It left me totally unfulfilled....what happened? Did she die? I don't want to read a hot loving incest story with such a confusing ending. It took away from the story, for me.

Really great until the very end. Why on earth would you spoil their happiness with miscarriages and separation?

Perfect... until the final paragraph where you took a dump on it. I mean really? Saying they had a perfect relationship for 18 years but then a miscarriage, then he gets married and has kids to someone else? Fuck. Off. I'm just going to assume that last paragraph is some sick joke to piss readers off. Makes no damn sense.