All Comments on 'The Hiding Game Ch. 04'

Way to go, once again. It's a winner, and I say that as a "tough grader."

A beautiful lady, a talented photographer, and an outstanding writer--you're truly a triple threat

Hi Jen,

once again a very good story. It's really a pleasure to read your writing, I could spend hours doing so. Looking forward to your next publication, sweet lady.

Excellent story, still.

You have a great way with words, and putting them together in a realistic way. Makes me feel like I'm right there.

Told ya he loved her! haha. As if nobody knew.

I liked this one a lot. It is starting to unravel the "hiding" side of the story. The romance that is developing is sweet too. Nice, clear, easy to read and enter writing style.

Great job Jen!