by h3lls_sweety
Could have been a bit longer; more sex, more detail with the two of them
I think I may have to send your story to my wife... I have my tricot, my cape and my flintlock pistol in my closet, ready to feed an active imagination! Ah, now where can I find a cave? lol!
PostScriptor
nice story but "she left untarnished" i dont think so, he took the one valuable thing she had lol
had no problems reading the story, some people are just too anal
Your story isn't a bad one, but you should have it edited for grammar mistakes. Makes it harder to read.