by imp42
Your unique style of writing allows me to place myself as a ghostly third person and yet still allows me to know the thoughts and feelings of the villianous hero.
I always enjoy coming back to this tale time and time again.
<3 LadiDarkMoon
There were a few inconsistancies that caused me to stutter while reading, but overall liked the story and loved the setting and time that it was set in. Wonderful detail, and I agree with LadyDarkMoon that it's great knowing the narrator's thoughts. ~Bren