All Comments on 'The Highwayman'

Whew, where do I start? The story line was choppy at best, there was no flow, it went from one topic to the next. There was no real understanding of the characters so you can't really connect to them. I give you props for writing a story, but I'm sorry to say that I didn't enjoy it. Keep writing though because with practice you could be awesome.

I have to agree and disagree with the previous comment. It was scattered slightly and it didn't reveal very much about the different characters; however, I am very interested to see what happens, to read Griffin's story. Please don't stop, continue this story

Waiting for a next chapter (HINT)... But while I am, with begrudging patience, I'm gonna give a few of these comments a "They'll explain it all to you at the Betty", and a "Shut up woman, get on my horse". But seriously, you very succinctly set us up for "a long story...", please don't Moffat us.

Its been 4 months since this entry and I'm hoping that you're just having a slight case of writers block. I sincerely hope to see another entry to what will lead to a continuation to be a great story of my favorite kind! I search this site every couple of days waiting for new historical romance stories/novels/novellas. Please finish.

-rockakittyn