All Comments on 'The Hillingdon Club'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
unfinished

The story unfolded wonderfully, then fell flat at the abrupt ending. Was this intentional to set up Part 2? What was in her head on the walk home? Did her ass leak cum for days as in her youth? Did her husband notice anything unusual about her at home? And did she go back for another installment?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great start ...

... but definitely needs sequel. Ends in a downer mood. Like for protagonist walking home dirty the reader feels ... ?

Lots of promising potential. Does she continue to feel bad about it and regret her decision - or does she recover enough until next visit to embrace the fun in the orgasms and take the slutty humiliation and occasional ass pain? How will she explain the money to her family? Will she meet some students, personnel, co-sluts?

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