by Sean Renaud
The story was well written - but too efficient, the passion of the moment was not conveyed.
I liked it a lot! Keep it up Sean.
There is always the chance there is something other than the same-old same-old. However, you seem to be stating these are all the same, that there is no originality, no effort expended in these stories. The real question is: if they are, therefore so shitty, why did you give it a high rating?
....have to try a black man.So few stay.Pistolpackinpete