All Comments on 'The Hodengreif Procedure Pt. 01'

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mul717ud35mul717ud35almost 3 years ago

A fascinating thought experiment. World building is really hard and you create a place I'd love to hear more about. Some of the intimacy and engagement with character I usually read for is tricky in this kind of report but I'm hoping you'll decide to write some stories that emerge from this dystopian vision and explore male submission further.

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Having received favorable comments and a number of helpful ideas (thank you), I am working on further chapters of "A Game for Learning about Yourself." It might take a while before further chapters are up though. Thanks to all those who made comments on the first chapters o...

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