All Comments on 'The Home & Family Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Even better

getting better with each section. We could have a real master writer in the making here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Still a good story, but

she goes to the creek to bathe, before they get together at the end of the workday, and he doesn't...?

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