All Comments on 'The Home Wrecker'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Shit happens. BUT why did he keep with putting up with it?!

Sex life goes down. They take people in. No privacy! All the money they have rent room,go on weekends away etc . He did nothing! She cheated and cheated. Having orgasms just listening and then going home and using husband as dildo. He will always come in second to big dick and all the orgasm you had. And pregnancy. So hot to be his slut never thought about STDs or pregnancy?!

He encouraged daughter to stay in touch etc with mom. Just what every father wants ! A cheating slut around daughter to teach her all the sluts ways.

MC just another wimpy cuckold!!!!

What a waste of my time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WRITER IS A WEAK WIMPY CUCK

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow... how ORIGINAL! /s You did "check all the boxes" for this type of story and did it well. The crazy friend twist was nice. Liked MC's attitude at the end.

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Kids gone from home, check; great life, check; wife's crazy, manipulating friend, check; wife going out to eff other man, check; insane rationale/justification, check; hubby loses it, check; becomes catatonic, check; pukes, check; can't stop wife due to break-down, check; other man is sex-machine, check; wife has amazing adulterous sex without any thought or regrets, check; walking funny, check; hubby calls kids and spills the beans, check; hubby calls female friend and gets sympathy, check; overly responsible daughter comes home to confront, mom; plot to steal hubby by wife's friend, check; hubby has a friend who is a P.I./SEAL/Hax3r, check; conniving friend has pang of conscience/guilt, FAIL; STD test, check; cheating wife pregnant, check; didn't have the baby, FAIL; Literotica 'Wife Steps Out One Night Only' story, 93% compliant; Score: 5.00

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Disgusting

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

wife = A PIG FUCK!

husband = A HUGE VAGINA COVERED IN PINK COTTON CANDY

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dump the cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Let's seeeee.... MC puked, ran away, got drunk, involved his child in his marital problems, and the female MC was zapped by the Martian Slut Ray. Oh, and there was the toxic female "friend" of the wife. Yep, I must be in a Loving Wives story. Looking at the comments confirms it. I have to wonder at the sanity of these people who read badly written, unbelievable, poorly plotted fiction for FREE and lose their freaking minds. Do they go nuts over a TV show where something they don't like happens? Wow, tenuous grasps on reality abound.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another wimpy cuckold MC.

And the other cliche!

She is your mother and although a cheating slut who broke her vows many times mentally and emotionally and only a few times physically she is just the role model for you to stay attached to

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was like a badly written version of February Sucks except Kathy as the home wrecker. She sees his ring on the table and suddenly the slut spell was broken? And of course the sex with Todd was over the top amazing. Because yeah a husband if 23 years hasn't taken the time to learn your body. Whatever. Just get a divorce. Your daughter is grown up. Your wife doesn't respect you. Worst is how she dressed up, threw it in his face, assumed he accepted since giving silent treatment, and then ran off to get fucked several times that night. Poor version of February Sucks with a crappy reconciliation on the first counseling session. Gah!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Oh you poor bastard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Couple of question, how do you live w/ her, or even w/ yourself, now that you know youll never 1- be the best lover shes ever had and 2- that she'll always have a real dream lover to fantasize about when youre boring her in bed w/ your teeny tiny boi dick, that she cant feel and only puts up w/ so youll continue to provide her the nice lifestyle shes grown to fell entitled too? How do you deal w/ the B S moans and screams and dirty talk about you fucking her harder w/ your big dick. It was a satisfactory dick until she met and experienced a"real man dick", now shes whoring herself to her husband just to maintain her creature comforts, thinking "jeez when will the old fart w/ the useless, preteen sized dick die?" so i can then go buy gigolos w/ big dicks to try and catch up w/ what ive been missing all my life? No reconciliation. rk

Diecast1Diecast1about 1 year ago

I like the story . AAAA++

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The writing was good and the story flowed well but i hated the ending. I realize her fake friend played her but she still happily did it. She executed an innocent life after the fact. She isnt a good person and didn't deserve a happy ending.

RocketMan12RocketMan1210 months ago

I thought this was a hot wife story instead I got a RAAC story

Gearhead19801Gearhead198016 months ago

stupid stupid stupid stupid

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I gave this 3stars when it should've been 4. Reasons: after she went on her date, he phoned his daughter, And like other LW stories I"ve read but don't understand why, there's the "she's your mother/ don't be hateful to her," & all the rest. I can see the suggestings of trying to have some relationship with her, but more or less giving the mother a free emotional pass just irks me. And any child that does, I wonder if they don't agree on what the mother did.

>> 2. Even tho it took 6 months for hubby to return, there's no writing about what happened during this time, even tho admittingly there's the counselling sessions. But what before his returning?

>> 3, In counselling, he never asked why she listened to her friend to betray him. Moreover, he didn't ask how can he be sure she's not thinking of the guy & his masterful loving whenever she's with him. Maybe this was handled in the session, but it's not written.

In spite of the above, I'm on board with them remaining together, unlike an anon 11mo prior. But (s)he does present a valid point: trust. What she did to at least partially reclaim that trust isn't covered; anything she did seemed to be left out of the epilogue. Unfortunately, & the resulting 3 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

It is a decent story but some of your morals really are off centre, the big one is sticking up for his wife telling his daughter not to blame his wife or get hostile towards her for damaging the family??wow what a wrong message to send to his daughter. Cheat and those you hurt will forgive you..No! any message sent is one where there is a penalty to pay for cheating since it affects more than a spouse..Also contradictions-He is presented as a strong successful man yet when adversity strikes he freezes and cant say"like hell you will" and then of all things throws up?not likely! Gauranteed NO husband would be tongue tied if a wife confronted him with a plan like that,I dare say it would be quite the opposite,maybe her ending up on her ass ...you ruined the story to 2 stars..

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