All Comments on 'The Honeymoon'

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Wfd821Wfd821over 3 years ago
Amazing

Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Wow, the comment about being mentally deficient was harsh, no one forced you read all 8 pages, jerk. As for the story, cool concept, but lacking in any real sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

clothes, not cloths

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Aaaarrrrgggghhhh!!!

I had to stop reading after the fourth cloths. Don't you use a search engine to look up the correct spelling of words? It makes you sound like an imbecile.

One cloth I could put down as a spelling error but not after that.

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A few disclaimers: I am not a writer. I have never claimed to be. My stories probably aren't for everyone. I am less interested in the sex as I am about the story and the minds of the characters. Maybe I will branch out, but my first few attempts will probably be written f...