All Comments on 'The Honeymoon Photographer Pt. 01'

For me, so far at least, this is more romantic than erotic . Maybe I am too jaded lol. The Lisa character is interesting as there seems to be backstory potential there but I understand she is not the central protagonist. I'll give PT. 02 a read and pass on my thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

Very enjoyable. Simple story that's just a tad different. I mean, taking a photographer with them on their honeymoon! Different. Ha. The "swapping" should be interesting. Particularly with a relatively "new" friend. How adventurous will she be? You carefully inserted the comment from her work-mate saying that meeting a guy was not her normal action. Helping avoid the unknown situation of "How often does she hook up like this? 10, 20, 50 times? So, Lisa isn't a complete slut. Just healthy and loves sex. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers.

Loved it! Definitely deliver on your plan to continue. I'll be happy to come along on that journey! 🤣

I like your approach! I agree that Ch 02 should cover more back story of Lisa. I think the Ch 02 should start with Jack reenacting Evan and Katie at the beach with Lisa, only to have Lisa make a few move on him to turn the table on Jack and made it into an unforgettable night for both of them. Maybe Heather gets into the picture as well for a very healthy threesome? Then the “swapping” begins at the end of Ch 02?

Eagerly awaiting chapter 2

Ugh! Better continue after leaving us hanging on that ending! Great story--thanks!

Great story. Please continue!

When's part 2 out?

Need more!!!!

Hi everyone...sorry it's been a while...I'm working on the second chapter!

Great premise.

Well written.

But needs more details about the sex. For example, when he goes down on Lisa there's much to little in the way of exactly what he did. What she felt. What she said. What she wanted him to do next. More? Less? Faster? Slower?

Did she want more fingering? Where? Pussy? Asshole?

Four stars.