All Comments on 'The Honeypot Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

What - over aleady?

Did you get suddenly bored with the story?

Great opening chapter and then this whizzes along and is over in two shakes with the improbable idea of Neil moving to London. A sudden drying up of ideas?

Suggest having another go and improving on this. A shame to spoil what was so good in the first chapter!

chytown over 3 years ago

MORE MORE MORE*****

Short tease but so fulfilling especially when it is to be continued. looking forward to chapter .03. Thanks for sharing.

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