All Comments on 'The Hope Chest'

Leonard should have been made to suffer first.

You got my interest, good job. A sad tale for sure. I would have liked a little more detail about why she was killed, and the circumstances around her final hours. That was not clear. I agree, it's good that Leonard paid the ultimate price but a little more time for him to understand his fate would have worked well.

Interesting story. I’m not sure I’ve ever read one like that. I too would have liked to see Leonard suffer more, but eaten by sharks regardless of his condition was an appropriate way for him to go. I might have to incorporate that into a story one of these days…