All Comments on 'The Host'

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X15X15about 6 years ago
Very Nice!

Great story. You make me hard and wanting... wish I was Michael.

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liz33ndliz33ndabout 6 years ago
fun story even tho it lacked detail

this had potential, but it went to fast with very low seduction and anticipation. it still held my interest tho,.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Cute story. But he is not a Dom

Cute first time story. Too rushed left out any Dom Sub relationship. All he did was take the lead with a virgin. That's how its done. He is not dominating powerful women like this. Change it to a boy discovers he's gay. Or older man takes my virginity

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Top - yes, but he is no Dom. At least not in this story.

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