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Unable to take anymore, she reached down with her free hand to make it stop. The flesh of the creature, still hidden from sight by the shrinking obstruction of her belly, yielded to her fingers like a gelly, but then gripped them tightly and clenched hard enough to hurt if they moved. Its parent had used the same technique to immobilize her while it deposited its offspring in her womb.
The stimulation moved beyond pleasure to pain, then beyond pain to a sensation she could not name and did not understand. She stopped screaming and just hung from her bonds, panting desperately and twitching every few seconds. Finally, mercifully, her awareness faded out.
Yeva woke with a start from the dreamless sleep to find herself still strapped to the operating table, sore and dehydrated. The bulge in her belly was gone, and the doctor was nowhere to be seen. With her left arm freed, she could just barely reach the control console, and with some straining she managed to hit the emergency release key. The bands holding her loosened and retracted into the table and she slid down to land in a clumsy crouch on the floor.
She peered under the operating table and beneath the console, but found no trace of either the doctor or the creature. Her eyes fixed on a ventilation grate. The was only a gap of one centimeter between each of its slats, but then, the creature had apparently exited her body without causing any discernible damage, a testament to its malleability. Or hers.
Straightening up, she retrieved the robe from the storage locker and dressed, leaving off the slippers. She then examined the access panel beside the door. The display showed it was still locked from the inside, which meant the doctor never left the room. Not through the door, at any rate.
Yeva did not trouble herself with the mystery. Why should she care about the doctor's fate, so long as she did not get retired over it? She unlocked the door and, casting one last glance at the ventilation grate, went to give her report.
Continuing the excellent erotic storytelling, this chapter thickens the plot with questions that are carefully left unanswered. I particularly liked her sense of practical satisfaction at the end.
I really liked this one. I see a lot of the "Alien" type movies in this story and am left wondering what the creature looks like. Will it be half human? Can't wait for the next chapter. Well done.
I drew inspiration from a lot of science fiction, most notably Alien, Metroid, and (oddly) Battletech. There will be at least one more installment!
Chapter 3 might take longer, but we will see! The creature will, of course, be back.
I felt pretty uncertain about the category for this one. It is definitely sci-fi, but has strong elements of horror (of the Alien bent, as you observed) and noncon. I ended up going with sci-fi in part because that was where I had filed the first story in the series.
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Oh, I was not disappointed! :) You went the Alien route and captured the dark, rising tension very well. I found this extremely exciting in a cinematic way; I needed to keep reading to find out what happens and I think I was leaning forward by the end of it. ^.^
As such, this was not a pure stroke piece the way the first chapter is (glorious, that one), but this develops the dystopian corporate world efficiently, gives the reader a look at Yeva's almost programmed responses (up until the doc got what he deserved...yay), and the entwining of sci-fi/biological detail with the description of the action definitely stroked my geek side.
I am also lefting wanting more, and look forward to the next piece. Many questions! What happened to the creature? What does it look like? It saved itself by savings its host/mother, of course, but what will it do next? And ergh, you've got the slave/artificial being thing nailed with her first response after such a strange encounter being to go give her report! No, Yeva, be a self-aware individual! ;)
I love your style and the world you're building. I could wonder whether this might also fit in the "Erotic Horror" category as well, but...eh, that section is very hard to predict what will be liked, and there is more than enough science fiction here to justify it.
Well done.