All Comments on 'The Hot Shower'

Thanks for the daily ir story, woven in to the usual good friend uses buddies wife for fun story. Theo will probably like it and you can change unwilling to willing cuck too.

The body count or financial body count is totaled. All this says is Lena is a backstabbing slut who will be divorced and living with Dwayne and his wife through her pregnancy. Not erotic at all.

So how do we start about this garbage first would have been better in the interracial section or ( maybe pushing your luck) in the erotic story section but this pile of garbage 2nd you can’t make up your mind on who is married to who check the start of this pile of garbage to notice 3rd the biggest thing the thing at the end was you going to be a proper man at the end of the story and say the husband came home found them like that husband gets mad throws them both out of the house then gets his revenge like a proper man and becomes the hero of this story like it should be on this section but no the reason you didn’t finish it because you are a lowest form of scum ( have check up on you on what you love your secret fetish ) you wanted the husband to become a cuckold which on this section the proud section of loving wife section is the biggest no no you just stopped it there so you didn’t get flack from these proud people you utter form of scum just to save face so you didn’t get shafted by the reviews you are lower than low if you was a man ( which all being you aren’t) you would of finished it and made sure the husband got his revenge by getting rid of a cheating no good wife and no good “ friend “ but hey if you want to write a part 2 of this story and do that the husband comes out the hero I don’t mind on offering my apologies but that very doubtful isn’t it ( you write like you are more of a pussy than a true alpha male you are more interested in being a cuckold than a true male ) so unless you are going to write a proper cheaters never win story where cheaters get caught and destroyed stay away from this section please

Love is a many-splendored thing... 5*s

. . . it was said she had G cup tits. Gorgeous women don’t have G cups, only fat women have udders that size.

I hope the creampie is brûlée, oh what the hell am I saying, I‘l suck it from the tap.

No need to attempt to throw my dicklet in tha cave-cunt of my hot slut now being black-drilled.

I‘m still a little worried about being stingy with the Astroglide in my ass, might be a pain in tha butt.🤪

Honey, I‘m on my way upstairs! I‘m all in fo ass to mouth and gargle too!

God I love this woman, she‘s a LOVING WIVE !!!

Good story so far looking forward to them being caught and the husbands reaction.

... Will end up making you think twice before letting any men that happen to be straight crash at your place... even trusting your own brothers could end up turning you into a cuckold!

Also: never expect any woman who happen to have humongous boobs to stay faithful to you. Especially if a big dick happens to be around. 'Makes you wonder why she married you in the first place...

Yep, your typical flap story that you wouldn't mind if you saw a porn scene of it, but can, for some reasons, bothers you if it is written. Hey, what can I say - we perverts are a weird lot...

But it's only a flap, folks. Nothing to take the least bit seriously here, and therefore to get upset about.

No comments...Just 1*

I didn't even get to the fat lady G cup. But we have Dwayne's strict personal code to declare bullshit on - I was a 1 bomb. Don't think you can fix this mess.

How about sheer stupidity?

1 star

Where the heck did anybody get such an idea? Cheaters win every day as evidenced by all the cheated upon men who haunt these comments sections.

BTW don't care for the story line but you did a pretty good job of telling your story, Really think you should have finished it though. cd

That's about all I can put it down to! This is not the worst story on this site... but you tried your best. I suspect you will eventually reach that depth!

If there are elements of the story you don't like, you can bypass it all by just reading the tags and being grown about content you don't like.

What tags? We didn't know that this was an ir story until we saw the friends name was Dwanye. That gave it away immediately.

You mean the tags that you can only see when you open the story and get to the end of it? Those tags?

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The only use for the tags I can see is if someone does a search on only the tags, because outside of the, they are worthless. If the site wanted to use them, but their effort would have been better spent finding some way to expand the synopsis part of the story to incorporate the tags.

Is there a part 2 when all their worlds come crashing down?

Lovely friend and wonderful wife in this story, just a normal day in the LW genre.

That bit of forbidden fruit adds to the suspense and now with the early arrival of the husband, the drama continues. Ignore the racist pricks like 26thnc who whine and cry any time all the characters don't match themselves. Thankfully he's old and will be gone soon. This story is perfect for this category as its about a wife having sex with others. The fact that he is black is secondary, as it should be in life. Sadly there are still too many losers who can't see beyond color to the real story. Please continue and let us know how this story progresses.

You lost me when you wrote Dwayne was to busy to attend Lena and Dwayne's wedding.

You probably meant Lena and Theo's wedding.

There is no story begin Dwayne's color. Author made that the point of his story just for further degradation of Theo. Find some one else to stalk.

Such good friends and yet he didn't attend the wedding and has no idea what she looks like???? whole story went downhill from there

Good story. A little hiccup in the names and a few other things but otherwise it still deserves a part two.

DO NOT! and I mean this DO NOT give in or read too much into most of the stupid comments you get on cheating stories. Some people think the world is perfect and cheaters never ever prosper. To those, I say this? Then why are most porn movies made with cheating involved, why is the divorce rate so high? Cheaters win most of the time because not all the time the person that gets cheated on finds out, if they do, they get a divorce and the cheater moves on, while the other gets depressed and drinks, or eats ice cream. There are hundreds of songs and movies about it, fact check before you make a comment. Plus this is a work of fiction! Meaning Dwayne and the wife really don't exist, they are made up. If you take this that seriously then get off the internet.

Oh and to the anon that put Beta male and Alpha male. An alpha wouldn't hide behind an anon name, he would make up a name and post his comment.

Back to the AUTHOR, thanks for sharing your story!

Dwayne is #843 on a list of popular boys names, right behind Payton and in the vicinity of Darwin, Louie, Bode and Duncan.

As to why the guy missed the wedding, he might have been deployed, or in prison, or making a porno, it really has no application to the story.

I am not saying it is a great plot, and the magic cock / giant tits is not exactly new to the site. But I thought the spa meeting was a nice twist and the writing was hot.It was a good read - one of the best on the date published.

This avoided the necessary confrontation with the hub. That HAS to happen to legitimize the story as a LW

Nice read dude. Ignore most of the negative comments, you'll notice most of them are from people whom wont use their tag and or prolly dont have any stories of their own written.

Anon or not anon, this is not a damn question on a porn side worth.

The story was average, spanking da monkey fo a minute cum. Unfinished and not necessary serious about questioning the characters.

Unfinished poor result

That was an incredible read; the kind of stuff I visit this website for. PLEASE continue this story. I gotta see where it ends up!

No clue how many cocks u sucked to manage the high marks.. there is nothing in the story to justify evens three…

Dwayne's a great friend. Beat hm so badly he'll be in ICU for two months.

Accidental Infidelity

She comes home and doesn't realize that a houseguest is in the en suite about to shower in the spa. Hearing the shower begin to run, thinking her husband is at home ahead of her, she jumps in a steamy shower. Nature overrides propriety and the steamy shower boils over into the bedroom, where she hears her husband enter the house cheerfully proclaiming, "Hi honey I'm home!"

A Leap into the midst

Nothing looks quite the same in a fog. A leap into the fog is a journey into a zone of uncertainty. One never knows what emerges from the mist. Lena jumped into a steamy shower expecting to find her huband. Instead she found a friend and a lover. What will she do when her husband finds out? Read the Hot Shower.

Having a sexy big titted wife like I do this is very hot

Well another torched marriage. Hope Theo doesn't end up in jail. Another wife who apparently loses all rational thinking capabilities when presented with "accidental" carnal lust. As a guy myself, I thought that us guys were the more likely to have all the blood flow to our genitalia.