All Comments on 'The Hot Tub and the Lady in Red'

It was A very good storie.would like to A second on this. the first was Very hot.

Can't wait for Tina's friend comes into the story assuming that you will have at least 1 seque.

That way, he could have rubbed his cock against her pussy and then jetted over her. Sure, he'd have to apologise, but what a kick!

I would have liked for him to have seen Tina's pink! She's the Lady in Red after all. I love that song too.

There is only one female character, did you really need to mention her by name eighty times?

Coming of Age

Exhibitionist gives us a genteel coming of age story which a young man climbs in a hot tub with an avant garde neighboring couple, confident in their own skin. The erotic element of watching Tina, the lady in a cute red outfit, undress an enter the hot tub in the natural state supports the story line. Well done!

The undressing of Tina is great, nice slow build up!

Great Until the Sudden Stop.!. Hardon-Interuptus;(

I voted it right in the middle.

Not bad, but I sincerely expected her to place a towel between herself & the furniture, & that would lead the narrator to think about her with blankets & himself, etc. .