by Voboy
Really, really nice - carefully developed and sensational characters. It’s rare that I keep reading a story where the lead is such a bastard, but I love the way that you draw us into his story and then give him his come-uppence. I was expecting her to turn out to be a werewolf though - was that a red herring?
I love this story. This was so well written and compelling. Really great job!
Very good read with a brilliant sleazy protagonist and a suspenseful buildup.
Interesting ending... A little light on details. What do these succubi do with thier time? They serve thier elders? And Rick, as youngest serves them? Do they hunt humans? But they were not consumed, so do they consume others? Or do they just feed on one another? Orgies, or one on one, or small groups? Do they invite humans? Blood cows? How long would I cum before my heart failed if I was lucky enough to have the Queen? Inquiring minds want to know.
A true horror story. Ricky was a horror, did he get what he truly deserved? Actually thought Julia might be some other fantasy figure but ultimately Ricky paid for his bad deeds. Well written and kapt me reading to find out what happened to Ricky and Julia.
5⛤