All Comments on 'The House Boat - Day 02'

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gametime279gametime279about 3 years ago

I'm absolutely loving this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Amazing story. Would love to read more if your up for continuing the story!

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 3 years ago
As to gametime279's comment....

Me too!...Never argue with a determined women!...Can't wait for the next chapter!

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 3 years ago

I'm loving this story as well......can't wait to read on.

smltwnguysmltwnguyabout 3 years ago

Great story, keep it going.

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

What a lovely story, lm really enjoying it. Please keep this tale going. I hope and pray your Muse can give us many more chapters to enjoy. We, your fans want to see their relationship develop further, even past the holiday and back into real life. Want to see them as a firm couple, husband and wife. You know as well as I do in Australia, incest is illegal but no one is prosecuted. I have never read of an incest couple being pursued as long as they were discreet. Even happened twice in my family. Everyone accepted them.

So you have ample territory to cover with this story, please do so.

5/5

Pharmboy69Pharmboy69about 3 years ago

Great characters, great read. Please continue.

sp9983sp9983about 3 years ago

Very vanilla and boring.

SomeOddThoughtsSomeOddThoughtsabout 3 years ago

@sp9983 You are such a dumbass.

You complained in the first story, that it was three pages wasted, and yet here you are still complaining.

babaloo92babaloo92about 3 years ago

This is fantastic. Love it. Next chapter please!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 3 years ago

Love how this is progressing! WHO"S Vince??? LOL 5*

QuatlingTailQuatlingTailabout 3 years ago

So wholesome! Hope this one goes on for a while!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Totally boring with a sister that needs therapy

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 3 years ago

Great story with great style and action.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 3 years ago

Enjoying the read, looking forward to the rest.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Looking back over the comments, I'm amused by the source of the negative ones. 🤣 They generally hide their identity by posting anonymously. I guess that they don't realize how posting as anonymous causes their opinion to mean absolutely nothing. Keep up the good work, shakna. You're doing just fine.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Good story s

A different plan than most.

Rin is a crazy girl .

Hard to understand her moods.

Can’t wait for the next episode.

Ravus_SapiensRavus_Sapiensalmost 2 years ago

Okay, that scene when they say their vows during sex, that. Was. So. HOT.

juanviejojuanviejo5 months ago

Really fine rale.

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