All Comments on 'The House Boat - Day 03'

Looking forward to the next chapter - good story so far...

Love these two! 5/5

Well damn thats a twist I wasnt expecting. Nice job!

Keen to read more!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter as well.

Parents can be so unthinkingly cruel.

Keep it up, great story!

This just gets better. After all they have been thru, a happy ending please!

@Wargamer - Well... Of course! I wouldn't think of turning this one into a tragedy. A happily ever after... You just might need to get through four more chapters to get to it.

Life is messy and this story is about that fact. Awesome storytelling.

I love the older folks, Tom and Jan and their take on life, voices of experience. Unfortunately there are too many Vincents. Your portrayals are spot on.

It's very much like real life.

Terrible parents. I know them and have never understood them.

I have three almost grown children. Sometimes they make my life a living hell. But I can never stop loving them and I can never hurt them. I may not agree with their actions or choices but I respect them. It's their life, their mistakes. I can only support and back them up, protect them from the consequences. That's what parents are for. I don't expect gratitude or compensation from them. That's not how it works. They will pay their debts, not to me, but to their children. Then I will be happy.

Interesting adventure.

Well written.

Can’t wait for the next episode.

Wow. There's a special place in Hell for family like that. No, literally; according to Dante, the deepest circle of hell is devoted to traitors and betrayers, and there's really no other word for what their parents and brother did.

As sad as this is, it is very well written. I just hope there's a happy ending, one that almost certainly fors not involve their family.

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This is so good it’s f’d up. Think I’m gonna read toofie now.

NOT ALL GOOD STORIES ARE HAPPY ONES...CINCO ESTRELLAS!