All Comments on 'The House Cleaner'

I though this story was very hot, I really liked the way the daughter set up the maid to find her in her bed doing that, or did the maid plant the idea in the daughter's head when she showed her body during the off and on power outage, not sure you could improve on this story except to write what they did on the weekend they were together and what the maid showed her

I like you style of writing the sexual build up was excellent and very hot. I have just one small suggestion: you said they had a blackout and then continued to tell us how they had no lights and the air conditioning didn't work.

Most of this is unnecessary because everyone knows about blackouts. All you did was waist time telling us again. Okay, the main thing with the blackout is the loss of the air conditioner on a really hot day. You could have given more time telling how the house slowly became stifling hot, opening windows etc. Then the lead into the refrigerator and iced water. Again you could have described how the cleaners white top was so wet from perspiration and how her boobs stood out against the wet fabric.

Apologies for going on but I wanted to share a few ideas with you.

Great Story with a possible second chapter; after all we need to know about all the other things the cleaner can do.

Five Stars and Favorite Author

Ok, I think that, if in the first paragraph there is an obvious "oops"... they are in a blackout (aka NO POWER) and yet the 'fridge still dispenses water? REALLY? Are hamsters powering the house?

Literotica you are amazingly selective on what you publish... <shaking head>

And needs a sequel. Would be nice if it turned out the cleaner had an affair with the mom as well.

Reads like a part 2 is needed

I thought it was a good story a nice build slow , but not slow , sex action was nicely described .Well done !